Essay Improvements
In English class today, we went over a couple more documents and revised them together, as well as talk about the importance of teamwork. First of all, we were assigned to reread our teammates’ drafts and highlight what we didn’t know, which is equivalent to what needs to be cited. In the few documents we looked at as a class, there was still some pieces of information what wasn’t commonly known, but left uncited. In addition, Mr.Paterson found many personal pronouns in a few academic essays, which doesn’t belong in one. Since this is something we’ve gone over multiple times, he reminded us to not make the same mistakes as we continue writing up our academic essays. One good part that was pointed out, was that someone had written about their personal experience. It was a strong claim, however, the teacher mentioned that it was grammarly incorrect. I’d like to make sure to read my teammates’ writings carefully and thoroughly so that the same doesn’t happen to my group members. Lastly, w...